CrunchyOrphan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Part I]

decent animation, but way too random, and no plot.

don't get offended, but I would say that this has little point, due to its lack of plot, and the odd movie sound effects. For example, I don't really know who the character was, or why he was travelling, and the voices sounded kind of awkwardly placed. That said, the animation was pretty good, and you obviously put some good time into it. I would highly suggest that you continue with flash, using your same style, but with some good plot and sound, (maybe music is voice acting isnt your thing?) =)

[Hyperdrive!]

A bit crude, but impressive

lol...was that a traffic-light man that I saw briefly? :D

the animation was good, very cliche anime opening, but had a kitchy feel to it. The animation wasn't perfect, but it was impressive. The best parts were when you rotated the perception a little, like when they circle around and stuff.

[Obie episode 1]

Very impressive for your first flash

I'm sure this will get protected. Very impressive for a first flash, you definitely have potential. The main thing that I saw was a lack of plot, but you incorporated some funny things. It's a bit random, but I would encourage you to continue with your idea!

[Starguyz: Can I Have It?]

ahaha, funniest one so far...

I'm a fan already. I guess what makes the flashes work, other than the inevitable violence, is the excellent voice acting and sound effects.

[Starguyz: Bug Hunting]

Lol, killer fly

I like the humor and the violence.
A bit short, but I guess that's why they're called "shorts"
The animation seems fine, but if you made me give a suggestion, I would say make the logo on their shirts look a bit better. Maybe take away the black lines on the star and put a blur on it or something. Not important, anyways, the whole thing was great! Very funny.

[Starguyz: Fun with Cancer]

Pretty funny

I don't know why, but I found this pretty funny. Nice use of blood too. I enjoyed watching it, and Ima go watch the other episodes that it looks like you have as well. =)

[Harry Potter 6]

Very impressive graphics

I guess it was a bit odd because it was harry potter...not really an original plot, but you more than made up for that witht he graphics and stuff. The music worked very well with it.

[Wish You Were Here]

Nice Graphics

Your use of blur effects was amazing... did you just use adobe for that? Would have been neat to see some more animation, and it looked like the animation got cut short, maybe the song. Only a couple of the graphics were iffy, and it looks liek you just got lazy on those =) overall, nice job, and good choice of music.

GloineFiodh responds:

Thanks. I do get lazy... Really lazy. And I am also impatient. I can't stand having a flash sit on my computer to long. Thats why it gets rushed. Thanks though!

[Animations Of 2007]

Funny stuff

I really like your animation, I hope you put more on newgrounds. My fav of yours is the haloween flash that you did, because it was very unique and humorous. I cracked up at bits like the cow that was just randomly standing there :D

Noxx11 responds:

Thanks a million! The music had been a little more synched when I made it, so the cow was supposed to come when there was a "moo" in the music. I'm working on next halloween's movie.

[At The Bus Station]

A bit crude, but amusing

I like how you incorporated alot of flash techniques in this flash. I'm guessing it's one of your earlier works, but it works nicely with the music. Ooc, how do you add music to a flash, do you just put it in the first frame of the movie? Funny ending in its own grisly way.

sysrq868 responds:

This is my second submission, and pretty much also my second flash work ever. That's why it... could be better.

For music, add a new layer to the flash, create a keyframe where you want the music to start and from the frame's properties, select the music that you have previously added to the library. You might find some aid from Google.

Thanks for the review!
-- sysrq868